Bonjour tout le monde ! (Niveau bac +1) Quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mon devoir. Et m'aider pour ce que je n'ai pas pu faire s'il vous plaît. Merci

Bonjour,

J'espère que vous allez bien :

Alors en lisant tes réponses, j'ai quand meme voulu corriger certaines erreurs ainsi que rajouter/modifier certaines mots par souci de clarté et de syntaxe.

What are you going to do ?

I am going to travel in an English-speaking country to visit and  improve my English skills

Where ?

I am going to the United States of America ( conseils : évitez les abréviations pour démontrer un niveau de langue plus aisé et soutenu )

When ?

I am planning to go to in the United States in January for 12 months ( 1 year )

Experience :

What ? Description ?

I will attend the Cheyenne Frontier Days which is a show a rodeo organized each year since 1897 in the 19th century. ( n'oublie pas le sujet "je" = I avant le verbe )

Transport - means/ costs ?

My mean of transport is a car. It costs around 14.65 $ to 23,67 $ ( par jour ? par semaine ? par mois ? )

Accommodation - type/ cost ?

I will stay in hotel which cost  56.36$ par night.

.....( suite )

Experience 2 :

I will see the Redwood national park in California. I am eager to see the huge and breath-taking trees of this park or even enjoy Sequoia National Park's amazing largest trees on the planet and its imposing granite peaks.

Transport - means/ costs ?

I will need a bus and it costs from 39.43$ to 56.33$

Accommodation - type/ cost ?

I will stay in a hotel which costs 70.97$

Cultural considerations :

The locals are nice although some places may be suspicious.

Things to pack :

What ?

- passeport, authorization ESTA, pictures

-  health books, travelling guides,  toilet repair kits

- personal drugs, a camera

Why ? ( comme la phrase contient des erreurs de syntaxe )

I need to travel with passport and an ETSA as the former is a document allows me entry into many countries including the United States of America and the latter enables me to travel to one of its 50 states without any visa.

Costs ?

The ETSA authorization costs 14$

The passeport costs 96.94 $

Contraints ?

Unfortunately, the approval of the visa was very tardy. In addition, I had problems with transports and had problems to find accommodations.

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